The documents both start with the title of the paper followed by the names of the authors. Though both abstracts are found at the start of each paper, the slime mold paper labels the abstract as such while the leaf-mining paper does not. The leaf-mining paper is structured like classic primary literature, featuring level 1 headings for the introduction, methods, results, discussion, and references sections, as well as various level 2 headings within each section. However, the slime mold paper is organized by topic using only level 1 headers, as it is a review article rather than primary literature.
The abstracts of both papers are short paragraphs describing the object of and reason for the study. The introduction to the leaf-mining paper opens with an explanation as to why the subject of the study was chosen, followed by a series of explanatory paragraphs concerning the reasons for the study. The first section of the slime mold paper describes the conceptual question at hand and addresses the underlying reasons for the multiple studies and experiments referenced throughout the paper.
Comments
Identification
The comparisons of the articles are great, however, you should begin the first paragraph stating which two articles you are comparing instead of 'the documents'. This way the reader doesn't have to make inferences on what the articles are about from the second sentence.
use abbreviations
I think that you should code each article so that a person who does not know which article that you are referring to would know which article you are talking about. For example, while you don't really have to name the article every single time, (the article names are way too long and can clog up your own writing) but it might be helpful to just name them and put (article 1) behind it and afterward just refer to the article as article one in the paragraph.
mentioning articles
I think when you first mention each article, you should properly mention them with their full title, author, and italicized. Then when you mention the article again, you can refer them as, for example, [Author's name] article.... This will make it so you don't have to write the long titles each time.
mentioning articles
I think when you first mention each article, you should properly mention them with their full title, author, and italicized. Then when you mention the article again, you can refer them as, for example, [Author's name] article.... This will make it so you don't have to write the long titles each time.
mentioning articles
I think when you first mention each article, you should properly mention them with their full title, author, and italicized. Then when you mention the article again, you can refer them as, for example, [Author's name] article.... This will make it so you don't have to write the long titles each time.
This may be mistaken, but you
This may be mistaken, but you made this comment about eight times.
mentioning articles
I think when you first mention each article, you should properly mention them with their full title, author, and italicized. Then when you mention the article again, you can refer them as, for example, [Author's name] article.... This will make it so you don't have to write the long titles each time.
mentioning articles
I think when you first mention each article, you should properly mention them with their full title, author, and italicized. Then when you mention the article again, you can refer them as, for example, [Author's name] article.... This will make it so you don't have to write the long titles each time.
mentioning articles
I think when you first mention each article, you should properly mention them with their full title, author, and italicized. Then when you mention the article again, you can refer them as, for example, [Author's name] article.... This will make it so you don't have to write the long titles each time.
mentioning articles
I think when you first mention each article, you should properly mention them with their full title, author, and italicized. Then when you mention the article again, you can refer them as, for example, [Author's name] article.... This will make it so you don't have to write the long titles each time.
mentioning articles
I think when you first mention each article, you should properly mention them with their full title, author, and italicized. Then when you mention the article again, you can refer them as, for example, [Author's name] article.... This will make it so you don't have to write the long titles each time.
Single paragraph
For the Perfect Paragraph assignment, please submit only a single paragraph.