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Submitted by damianszyk on Thu, 12/05/2019 - 16:32

A study done by researchers at the University of Michigan show that some oxidative stress at a young age can actually lead to a longer life. Oxidative stress occurs when cells produce more oxidants than they can deal with. Studying C. elegans, researchers were able to determine that worms that produced more oxidants during development lived longer than worms that did not produce as much oxidants during development. Of course, there are other factors that can aslo determine ones life expectancy. Genetics and enviornment are two factors that can affect lifespan. If your parents live a long life, the offspring will have a good chance of living a long life as well. Experiencing stress at a young age may make you better in fighting stress later on in life when you encounter it again. Since stress and age-related diseases are closely connected, scientists are looking into whether early exposure to stress in life have an affect on the predisposition for age-related diseases. Some of these diseases include Alzheimer's and dementia. In a next study, researchers want to look at what changes during development in worms that experience stress at a young age make them have a longer life expectancy. 

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"researchers were able to determine"
To make this sentence more concise, I would scratch out "were able to" and just leave it at "researchers determined"

Instead of saying "encounter it again," I would just type "reencounter it." Both send the same message, but one uses less wording and is less ordinary.

really interesting but I think it would be better if you weren't used in the paragraph. In addition, it's hard to tell whether the paragraph is talking about humans or worms. It might be best to make sure that the audience knows that you're talking about a study done on worms and not on humans. 

In the third sentence you say "more oxidants" followed by "as much oxidants", where it should be "as many oxidants" or the sentence might need to be rephrased entirely. You also write "enviornment" instead of "environment".