Each section of the shorter article was structured in such a way that each section talked about a new idea on the topic. The different paragraphs also talked about different details that were disparate entities but come together into a single coherent idea. However, the structure of each individual section was not to necessarily have an introduction, main point, and conclusion, but to describe the idea of what the section is about in detail, using as much paragraph as necessary to communicate the information. The role of each section is to add to the previous section so as to help explore the questions that were introduced in the introduction and add to the conclusion that the author makes in the end. The role that first paragraph play is to add the important details that are presented in the title.
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The organization of this
The organization of this paragraph was well planned out. I do wish it was more in depth about the kind of details that were discussed in the different articles and the second article was not touched upon as much. Really good job all around though.
Different
Instead of saying each article had different details maybe show what kind of details you are referring to. This way it seems less vague and gives the reader a better understanding of what you mean.
Repetitive Start to Sentences
This is an excellent comparison between the two articles. You might want to switch up how you start your sentences because you use "the role" twice.