In the field of biology, understanding the field of genetics can unlock many great things for fields outside of science. An example can be understanding how DNA fingerprinting can be used to convict a criminal. These ideas are sometimes not well-received by the general public at first, but these small ideas can lead to something big. Mammalian cloning is a subject that allows us to dip our toes into what the rest of the world can do with cloning. Dolly the Sheep is the first mammal ever to be cloned. Now, we clone all sorts of animals for both experimental and sentimental reasons. By sentimental, I am referring to the cloning of pets. Modern cloning companies can clone pets after it has passed away. It probably brings up the question, what more can our modern scientists do? Human cloning is on the line, and it brings up a controversial idea of whether we should be doing so. According to NHGRI, no reliable scientific evidence has shown whether human embryos have been cloned.
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Word usage
The overall flow of ideas is good, but some of the word usage is a bit repetitive. For example, the word "field" is used three times in the first sentence. Changing it to something along the lines of "An understanding of biology, and especially genetics, can unlock a great many things for fields outside of science," makes it a smoother read.
Acronym
You use this acronym "NHGRI" but I am unsure what this stands for. Maybe write out the complete name for this and the consider using the acronym for the rest of the aritcle. After google I realize it stands for National Human Genome Research Institute so you could write it like "National Human Genome Research Institute (NHGRI)" and then use the acronym for the rest of the writting in whatever paper this would be for?
Awkward Sentence
The sentence "By sentimental, I am referring to the cloning of pets" seemed a little awkward to me. I think rewording it or even expanding more on the idea might make less awkward. Overall it was a really great paragraph and enjoyable to read!