This week the class started working on proposal projects about the leaf miner Stigmella Multispicata taking root in a new host the American Elm. Our group is going to be focusing the research on the symmetry of leaves with careful measurements. On top of checking in the known host Siberian Elms and the new host America Elms we will be checking a few branches from all 15 types of elm on campus. We believe this can give us insight into why the leaf miner picks the leaves it does and a potential correlation for future host it may invade with similar leaf structures.
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Punctuation
Not that I have any expertise on this but, as i read your paragraph I cant help but notice that there are no commas. What I was taught, is that if it feels like their should be a pause in the sentence, then there should be a comma. Breaks in the thought but or connecting two things together should be separated by a Simi-colan. I would recommend verifying what I wrote here because my writing is shakey at best; I generally operate on the, “I’d rather be lucky then good any time” principle.
Punctuation
I definelty see a lot or errors and punctuation errors.