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In-class Exercise

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Perfect Paragraphs

Each week, post your own Perfect Paragraph and comment on three Perfect Paragraphs. Suggest improvements. Don't just say "Looks good."

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Infested rather than infected 5 years 8 months ago
Weirdly spoken sections, comma usage 5 years 8 months ago
Transition 5 years 8 months ago
Methods 5 years 8 months ago
Confusing 5 years 8 months ago
Picking one side of an argument is easier 5 years 9 months ago
Parenthetical clauses need commas 5 years 9 months ago
Parenthetical clauses are friends 5 years 9 months ago
topic sentence 5 years 9 months ago
First Sentence 5 years 9 months ago

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