This was an observational study about differences replicating an original figure by using only the methods section of a research paper. To develop this section photos were taken of a plant that showed leafminer activity. These images plus a map showing where photos were taken are used to create multi panel figure. The process of how and where the photos were taken were then used to develop a methods section of a research paper. This methods section was then given to another student to follow and create a figure based on the methods that were written.
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Details
Definetly I think you can write more to a point where it has more details.
Confusing Sentence
"...study about differences replicating ..."
this statement feels awkward, differences doesnt stand in this sentance on its own like this so maybe a bit more explanation on what are the differences or why differences
an example would be "... an observational study that focuses on the differences caused by replicating ..."
First Sentence
"This was an observational study about differences replicating an original figure by using only the methods section of a research paper."
The rest of the paragraph was good I would just reconsider using words like "this" or "it" for readers outside the class who might not know exactly what you're referring to.