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Urushiol Perfect Paragraph 2

Submitted by kcapri on Sun, 04/30/2017 - 16:52

When discussing the amount or concentration of urushiol in plants, it does depend on the growth conditions and the particular season. A study performed by Japanese researchers indicated the percent compositions of urushiol depend on its unsaturated bonds in Japanese, Korean, and Chinese Rhus vernicifera (lacquer trees). Researchers found that the most abundant urushiol was the triene urushiol at 71 percent, while the next most abundant was mono-urushiol at 14-16 percent, and diene urushiol at 5-8 percent concentration (Tetsuo et al., 2002).



Great paragraph, but I feel like there should have been some sort of quick introduction as to what you were talking about. It just seemed like a random way to start the pargarph, but it was very informative. 

This needs to be a little bit longer with some kind of introductian and conclusion, as is its not really a paragraph. Also you need to incluhde the citaion with your perfect paragraph post. Also yo say percent then percent concetration for two things in the last sentence I would use either for both to keeo the paragraph more consistant.